Part V   Writing

【写作点金】

审题时要着重注意题目要求，不能遗漏要点和信息，合理组织语言。这是一篇写给客户的电邮，在写作时应注意语气，且语言要简练和规范；其次是抓住关键点，切忌啰嗦。在邮件开头说明写信意图：向对方表示感谢；之后要用充分的理由说服对方接受使用纸箱包装产品。

December 27th,  2012

Dear Mr. Smith,                         
  As  a  sales assistant of the company, I’d like to express our appreciation for your ordering 100 cartons of shirts from our company. I am writing to suggest that your order be shipped by cartons rather than wooden cases.

  Cartons are lighter than wooden cases and cost less. We have used cartons for shipment in our transaction with a U.S.  company. The result was quite satisfactory.

  Looking forward to your reply.

                                                           Respectfully yours,

                                                               Wang Hai

【高频词句】

express appreciation 表达感谢

rather than 而不是

transaction with 与某人的交易

look forward to 期待